She loved him more than anything
in the entire world.
She heard his voice, her heart would sing
and she would cheer up.
He told her she was his angel
his beautiful red rose.
He said he would never leave her
on purpose anyways.
They've been together since they were thirteen
and their love truely showed.
There was rarely a day where they were seen
away from one another.
Then one day the girl got to school
her face red and tears in her eyes.
All her friends asked " what's wrong with you."
they were very worried about her.
Her boyfriend was on his way home last night
from visiting at her house.
All of a sudden there is a bright light
and a car drives towards his.
He swerves and tries to get out of the way
But he hits a tree.
He will never again see the light of day.
Because he died that dreadfull night.
The girl was very very sad
that she lost her one true love.
He was all she ever had
and now he was gone.
The girl goes home that night.
She is all alone.
She stabs the knife into her heart.
So she can once again be with the one she loves.
When he left her soul fell apart.
The broken soul of an angel.
Author notes
Not a very good poem but I hope you like it anyway.
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AWWW! I love it!
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Great Poem! Thankyouu Forr Sharingg x
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just great!
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Not a Very Good Poem..........BAH! Wonderful is the word. This made my eyes 'water' but not totaly 'cry'. I loved the poem. But this part right here.
She picks up the first thing in sight.
A sharp and pointy knife.
Sounds a bit aquard. Take out and it would amke it flow better.
Great Job.
Thanks For the Entry.
Kathryn.
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thank you for your comment. i edited this poem i hope it sounds better now.
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