For me you are precious like a Queen
And everyday I pray for our happiness.
I thank the almighty Allah, who
granted me a wife like you.
If I was the owner of all the wealth
of the world, I would have put them
near your feet because you are my Queen Wife
and I wish to keep you in wealth.
If any good looking young man gives
you flower in any formal programme.
I do not become jealous because you are
my beautiful Queen Wife and I am your King Husband.
Author notes
For my darling wife Hafsa Bintey Faruq
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Very Good
Your love for your wife shines through, you pledge your eerlasting love to her and are sure you have hers. Very good to be so sure of affection and love.
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Thank you. I will be honoured if you check some of my other poems.
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This is good. I like the ryhme scheme.... good job.
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Pretty, I love the rhythm of the piece and the emotion in it.
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Beautiful dedication, lovingly felt. Blessings.
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Wonderful
A very touching and loving poem. So well expressed. Many blessings in the contest.
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