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Man and woman

Hold me close within your grasp
make us last in this realm
never will you leave my side
how can we never win
my heart beats for the love of you
in this fatal blow
my darling how I love you in this life
never lost to go
when shall we come together
in a lovers embrace.

Neither one of us have ever met
in the time of war
come to me this lovely summer
come to me and drink
of the sweet cup of eternal love
you took me from the bleakest night
and brought me into the sweet sunlight
mate that is what I became
over and beyond the lasting horror
of the worlds end
Russian roulette is what this is.

 

Take a knife to that perfection of flesh

marring the beauty that resides without

I am to blame for this

I am the one to doubt

you took me as you wished

made me  yours

what am I to be in this life

a lover or a toy

death one day will claim us both

in this mortal world.

 

Darling one come to me

do not disappoint the one that craves

the love you give, the woman you made

trying to do what is right in a world gone mad

nothing can stop the feelings abounding

in the breast so sad

age you say has nothing to do with us

we are but man and woman.

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  • wowowowowow!!! i loved that I am adding it to the finalist list it is just so amazing I am almost unable to get my words out!!!


    The Positives:
    That was so interesting I really loved that you have such a wonderful poem here I loved the style it was amazing


    Room For Improvement:
    Nothing I can see you did wonderful



    My Favorite Part:
    Take a knife to that perfection of flesh

    marring the beauty that resides without

    I am to blame for this

    I am the one to doubt

    you took me as you wished

    made me yours

    what am I to be in this life

    a lover or a toy

    death one day will claim us both

    in this mortal world.


    You made death sexy how is that even possible????
    Overall:

    I give this an 10/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.

    ~*~Apathetic Poison~*~


  • estbelle gold member
    April 25

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    the desire is intense in here...and how you take the blame

    very very sensual