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FUCK!

Breath in
Exhale the stream of smoke the burns deep
burning like betrayal
you fucking bitch!

I should have seen it coming
your selfishness exposed you
exposed you for what you really are
come on bitch.

This betrayal has broken us
This betrayal is the end of it
When you die I'll smile
you fucking cunt!

Take another drag of that cigarette
reflect on this
you backstabbing whore
I'm bloody sick of your bullshit.

BREAKDOWN!

You brought the end
I can't take it anymore
your selfishness disgusts me

eh,fuck the whole thing.

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  • IneptRose
    April 25
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    very interesting Danny Boy. i think it's my favorite so far, so keeeeeep working.