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The Broken Soul of an Angel

Wrongs of a man, pains unseen
have clipped her wings
bruised her pale skin
once so strong now,
so weak and fragile

Once so beautiful,
now beaten and broken
defiled and dejected,

left with these scars

these wounds that never heal

 

All this pain, caused by one man

one small insignifigant boy

How could he do this you ask

One incredibly stupid mistake

a horrible accident and now

I must sit and think of what I

did and think of how I crushed

How I broke the soul of angel

THE ONE I LOVED

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  • DreamtSong-x
    May 2

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    The description in this poem is amazing. You are a fanastic writer. Never stop doing this, it'd be a shame for your talent to go to waste.

    -- Tor


  • HystericalHeart
    April 24
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    Um.. It's good. I like the slight discriptiveness, it makes it seem gentle. ^-^