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[ The warm glow of light, and the stiff smell of parchment, ]

     The warm glow of light, and the stiff smell of parchment,

     The rolling edge of my pen smears an even layer of ink to form  a letter, Which in turn forms a word and then a sentence...

A sentence, slinking and slithering like a serpent

unnoted until it strikes, violent like the Mamba or the Taipan, quickly making it's point(.) A period...Quiet...A pause in time...A moment or an eternity...To breathe...To see what life is if not knowledge.

    Knowledge the venom of the sentence. Seeping into your mind constantly molding and forming, boiling and storming, creating opinions and thoughts...Alowing you to discover and determine the true use of the serpent like sentences intellectual toxins.

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  • Shelby K
    May 31

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    very interesting write. i really like it. very detailed. i love your work. keep up the fantastic writing.


  • Marta
    May 21
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    I do like it. Jumps off the page. Very good writing.


  • Nangaleema
    May 17

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    writing about writing - a favorite topic of mine as well. it seems you enjoy seeing the ink flow across the page as much as i do. alas with the ease of computers, i find myself writing more and more at the keyboard. still - for me - nothing compares to the experience of the creative process as it manefests itself when i am alone in a hot bath, with candlelight, vivaldi, a lineless wirebound journal and a sharpie.
    this piece of yours puts me in a mood to write! thanks for sharing.

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