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Where are you?

I hoped and prayed for a day to come when love would be granted unto me
And yet...
Hope is frail and hard to hold
Impossible to even search for something intangible.
Where are you hiding? The taste of his lips on mine is hardly real.
The weight of this is hard to handle.
Where are you lurking? In the corner of my dreams
Haunting
Taunting
Leaving me to ask and wonder...

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  • lillypilly
    May 3
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    i like this very simple good luck...