i miss the guy who would look me in the eyes and tell me that i was his world,
without saying a single word.
the one who would hold me in his arms,
like he never wanted to let me go.
but my wishful thinking
got the best of me.
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Bravo, ma'am.
This is really good.
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wow
you ahve guy in sight with specfgic qualities in sightawright and you do make no bones about that....but you stumped readers in the end.....your wishful thinking got the ebst of ya....wowo...well done..check me and comment me...i have that may be to your taste -
Ohh I know exactly how you feel, and I could see htie being written on a bathroom stall in faded sharpie! I loced this and even though its hort, it packed some punch!
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"i miss the guy who would look me in the eyes and tell me that i was his world,
without saying a single word."
Aww, we all want that in our lives hun and it sucks how guys change, am i right? =|
It was sad and beautiful at the same time
And I especially liked the title, it makes me think of someone drawing hearts or something with a sharpie and all the ink running out and stuff
idk if that was the meaning of it but if so then wow. thats a pretty picture -
I really love this & I can feel the emotions so much, probably because I feel like I can relate. Beautiful write doll.
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writes by you are rare ,but they're always good when you do put them up
very heart-felt poem with a quick jab in the proverbial ribs of longing
-Trei
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