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The dappled light plays
And so do we

We are children of the sun
Meant to light everything

Where we are
There is no night

Perpetual bliss
But it all ends so tragically

As much as we would like to think it
We are not immortal

As another sister or brother fades
For a while there is shade

But never for more than a day
Do we remain in the shade

Forgetting what needs to be forgotten
Letting go of what needs to be let go of

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  • KaylaSHIKARI
    August 12
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    Wow..nice.
    I really liked this..very well written.


  • Jane Dohl
    May 6
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    Im not sure why, but in the beginning i felt hope and then towards the middle despair and at the end another burst of hope. I loved how it took me through that though. Its a delicious thing to savor diffirent emotions in just on setting.

    Thank you for sharing This was wonderful


  • In-pain
    April 24
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    I like it, I don't know what to say....It's wonderfull


    Keep the writting up