Soft pink
petulant lips
in stereo places
silk petals swollen
with temptations,
stirring my hunger
to devour them.
Two pools of passion,
each matched perfectly
alongside the bridge
of her nose.
Twin windows to
heavenly beauty
each graced with
sky blue, emerald green,
or chocolaty brown,
reflect the depths of love,
that one can savor.
A man can drown there
and die happy.
Lavish curls
or long strands
of silk,
frame natures
finest portrait,
cascading like
a waterfall to
tickle my cheek.
Succulent mounds
rise just a bit below
the nape of her neck,
perfect locations
to plant kisses
and watch
love bloom.
Two alluring
flesh buttons
await me below,
each one
set like jewels,
one in the center
of her quivering
ab-domain,
a natural comma,
this place to pause
with a tantalizing tease
and nuzzle desire
spoken only
in tongues.
Then on to
the other
a pink pearl
of bliss,
the crown jewel
of womanhood,
aching to be polished,
finger-painted
in a satin wash,
encapsulated
like a pacifier
between ravenous lips.
Let us not forget,
the honey-well
that waits
just above
the swaying
bucket below,
where one can draw
thirsty sighs,
and pump
passions promise
to a satisfaction
beyond our
wildest dreams.
All of these assets
blessed as well
with a gentle voice,
urging us onward,
inward, upward
with curious fingers,
and long limbs
that beg us to
take our leaves
from everyday stress.
Plus quick wit,
sharp minds,
and a most
loving companion
to share the
many paths
our lives together
are bid to follow.
A contest entry
- Feminine Charms by bonjourbunnie.
700 points, ended May 8, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Amazing!
I love this whole piece, especially the first few stanzas, but the whole thing just resonates with what a woman is.
Thank you for sharing, and good luck! -
Love it Soft pink
petulant lips
in stereo places
silk petals swollen
with temptations,
stirring my hunger
to devour them.
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This is very good write you have here good luck in the contest. It was a pleasure to read your poem.
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good one
I could not stop reading untill I finished and still my soul longed for more to read. I love this poem so much cus it shows how women are specially made by the Creator.It also reminds me of songs of King Solomons in the holy book.It also tells me that God is the best designer in universe.
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well done
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This poem sucked me in from the time i started reading it...I loved how you portrayed and emphasized the beauty of a woman it was so lovely
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Can't think of one word of criticism constructive or otherwise. Very nice write!
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I know her!!
this could make the ordinary folk blush! I loved it. what a great tribute to our female counterparts. I think you will definately score with the ladies!! thank you for sharing this sexy write...
peace to you always in all ways..
-KP
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Ahhhh! Why stop there? I would have enjoyed your portrayal of the rest of her anatomy, but what you did describe you described admirably. Well done Artis
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Amazing
I like the alliterations at the beginning of the first 3 stanzas, they are very effective in setting the mood of the poem.
I must say I'm pretty impressed. It's hard to write on this subject without filling the poem with cliches or using way too many adjectives. I found this pretty brilliant apart from ''aching to be polished,''
The thought of polishing would sort of creep me out a little bit... But thats just my personal reaction..
I liked the line "thirsty sighs". I think that's pure genius.
I like the way your feelings are expressed, it amused me, bringing back nice memories of love.
The last stanza is really beautiful. Thank you for this poem. Its wonderful to see so much raw emotion put in such a pretty way.
Maria
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Wow!!!
This is one perfect composition. Women should be so happy with this that they might as well five you an oscar of some sort. Seriously, this is beautiful, just like the subject.
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descriptive of a beauty of a woman in all it's possibilities
everything about her feels sublime
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sure makes all proud to be women!
way to write poet!
ears/Seattle
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Wonderful
This is amazing.
Your descriptions made me wonder and visualize a wonderful, passionate night.
This is very good.
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You are very astute for a guy. Who said we were the weaker sex? So now that I’ve got you “get on your knees and bark like a dog” LOL, just kidding! Good stuff here!
Love,
Amera♥
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Beautiful!!
this is awsome!! I absolutely love your descriptions!!
Khia
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