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Joe

I counted the scars on your stomach,
a constellation of puncture wounds;
the indentation from your broken rib
a perfect nook to warm my hand.
Maybe if you squeeze me tight enough,
we'll fuse like two atomic nuclei,
you nail marks etched into my back
like highway lanes. How I wanted
to keep driving with you tonight.
"Are those mountains?" I asked
of the shadows ahead
in graduated shades
of purple through the mist.
"No, that's smog." You shook
your head at my naivete.
"It's still pretty," I mused.
At least I have the permanent bruise
on my breast in matching colors--
a souvenir. You always bite the same place.
I saw mist rise above a highway bridge
last night--it was probably exhaust
from a truck, but all silver
in the streetlights it seemed
like poetry anyway.
Another hopeless romantic I am, I guess
And this beholder finds joy
in such oddities.

Author notes

I wrote this when I was still with an ex of mine. Before things turned completely sour, of course.

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  • piggyback
    April 24

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    This is such a creative love poem I love how you take the imperfections and make them look so beautiful, how you combine nature elements with how you felt, how you actually don't say a word of how you felt but show it so very clearly. This is good poetry.