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These Questions

What if I died tomorrow?
Would anyone care?

Would anyone remember me,

Or would I just be a wandering shadow?

A figment of a broken dream.

It is this question I ask myself

Each and every day.

As I walk down hallways

Through empty streets

and night time darkness.

I heard the enlightened prophet once say

"I am nothing..."

So why do I feel like making something.

You can't make something from nothing...

Can you?

Yet if nothing means everything

Then why am I here?

Who am I?

Why won't he leave me alone?

Why does he fill my head with fear?

Fill my loins with his filth?

Inside and out

I can never be complete.

Not anymore...

Am I forever a walking disease?

These dumb questions I continually ask

Walking and on-going to destination unknown.

Is there really joy in sorrow?

Please tell me what you think

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  • Sortingthroughlife
    October 3

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    I would. I would care. No, I don't know you, and maybe I never will, and maybe this one comment will set off a chain of events and we'll be friends, but no matter what, I care.
    The way the emotions are penned send shivers down my spine. You are an excellent writer, and I feel honored to be able to read this.


  • mysterious.angel
    April 24

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    look i know i barely know you but i would care if somthing happened to you i find that you have been through hell and back but i believe with a little faith you will succeed dont let others tell you who you need to be follow your heart listen and you will see


  • xxvampyregirlxx
    April 24

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    I think if you died alot of peopl would care and you would be remembered. I'd care and I know Matt (animal) would too


  • SingerOfTheLost
    April 24

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    amazing questions

    These are questions everyone asks themselves in their own way, and you expressed them perfectly, you put them into words i dont believe another could, it was perfectly written you deserve 1000 points for this if not more, saddly i can only applaud you, when you deserve something much more, your thoughts, these questions we should all ask ourselves and search for the answer, not just give up on...tho if the answers to these questions will destroy you, would you really need to know?


    • Seraph BloodStone gold member
      April 24
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      I wish I had the words to express my gratitude. "Thanks" seems so empty-hearted and empty handed. I really don't think it's all that great, but we are our own worst critics, no? I will visit you and return the favor, I promise.

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