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[ I can't even stand ]

I can't even stand
The sight of my own face
But I know in the end
I'm going to have to embrace
But I'll make pretend
What was will never end
Cause deep inside I don't have to hide
True feelings

I'll scratch away, all this pain
But when the lovers are gone
I'm still the same
So curse my name
I've got no one to blame
For the blackness will stay
With ever passing day
These are my true feelings

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  • forgotten song
    June 22
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    i can feel the pain in this, very much.


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 24

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    very lyrical...

    I can almost hear the tune behind this.

    Really nice and very different...


    Thyanks so much for writting


    Simon