I finally see this world for what it is
as i look at it laying atop my back...
I see the pain, the sorrow...
i see my love, my happiness dwindleing as it cracks to peices
under the stress of this world...laying atop my back
I watch as more people, more anguish falls from nothing
fall from where used to be empty space
onto this world...laying atop my back
With my eyes open, with my happiness, my love...lightly in-tact
i push this world of mine...off my back...
Author notes
I made this as the last little straw, fell on my world to make me crackle and burn.
im just wondering what people think about my poetry.
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Beautifull poem!!
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very nice write. sometimes the weight of the world can be too much to bear.
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Great poem!
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Nice
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I like it!
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Way to go, your on ur way to entering my world. Great poem.
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