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In the Ice

This room mocks me in your absence
Though I pull my legs tight
I can only draw them so close

The fan whispers as it freezes me
Of jokes and tragedy
Of needful things
And self-fulfilling heresies

The chorus chants that you are gone
And the refrain sings that it is cold

I am a firm believer
Though I do not know the the words
My ears have grown deaf from
Hearing prophecy
roared

My teeth chatter, so I know
That the world is far too cold
When the ceiling fan blows
For a man to be alone

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  • This was really good, i enjoyed reading it; i dont come across many poems like this. Thanks so much for entering my contest and good luck. Keep writing.

    -B