Thunder & lightning
oh so delighting.
just a little frightning.
and very exciting.
Loud and bright!
boom and light.
what a fright.
but thats allright.
Pretty but scary.
stay a little wary,
but dont bury,
under the covers
For you safe inside.
you wont get hurt.
so you dont have to alert.
have fun,hon.
A contest entry
- Thunder & Lightning by RedAquarius.
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Comments
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This is a peppy little piece but not quite what I was after. I do like the fun, bouncy flow you have in it. One minor typo; "frightning" should be frightening.
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Very, very cute!! Great job!
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