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Be true to self

Do not give
the laurels to friends
nor to yourself
if they do not merit
their worth,
for lies
will come back
to haunt the solace
of night.

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  • a great write well done. a clear concise point made so beautifully in such a small amount of words. well done!


  • capricornpoet
    April 24

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    laurels scarce

    in a hurried world laurels are sometimes just fleeting
    moments needed for the flavor of the time..
    a haunting they will go


  • suseann
    April 24

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    Always such wisdom projects of the humanistic colors in life. And it is true,what you've so eloquently proposed here. Most can see through heavy doses of faux flowers too. It's that hungry ego that tends to buy the bull more times than not. Wink

  • SadmanJim
    April 24
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    to clarify... I'm outta free "clapping guys", otherwise I would have given you three.
    Jim

  • SadmanJim
    April 24

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    Wonderful. Should be plastered on posters throughout the world. Would you send your muse over to work for me for awhile... mine is kind of silly.

    Write On!
    jIM


  • Darianna
    April 24

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    Oh indeed they will!!! This is very brief, but no words are minced here! Straight-forward and honest! Love it!

    Dari xxx

  • ya see this would be great. Solid sensible messages people need to hear. Please don't wait much longer I have so much to do.

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