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alive

i fight and i fight still
to match wits with myself
and i know the cure
but it's high on the shelf
everything so far from reach
from everything i know
and everything i think
the struggle means i'm still alive
i'm still fighting to win over myself
to win something in my mind
i'm still not living yet
but my god, i still try

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  • Renideo
    July 6

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    They say you are your own worst enemy, but we need enemies to fight, obstacles to overcome, foils to ground us, and by these we know our measure.

    Which is my way of saying I like it, and I can't think of anything constructive to say (I seldom can).