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Death, Who or What are you ?

 

Death, who or what are you?

Just the passing of our physical presence
into the unknown;

how frightening should that be?
Should we be terrified simply by uncertainty?

Like a radio, once the receiver is turned off
the program is still ongoing and heard through other channels.

Our God, by any name, or unacknowledged,
will ensure that the programs will continue.

I sometimes wonder if people, fearing death,
ever think back to the times before they were born.

Surly pre-birth is just as frightening as after death?

It is impossible for me to imagine
that at the time of Alexander or Jesus
there was no evidence of me—
existing in some form or other, somewhere.

The fearful unknown is merely our pre-birth past,
and our past death future.

Be content with now!

Accept the rest as inevitable.

Death is beyond pain and illness,
and after death, even death,
is a thing on the past.

Albert Gazeley ©

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  • theGazzelle
    July 28
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    ergo cognito sum?

    Death, where is thy sting? If reincarnation exists, then this is my last time around.


  • Ellis gold member
    June 16
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    Original Thinking

    There are a number of concepts here that are new to me. Excellent thinking.

  • celadia
    April 24

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    A lot of good thoughts here and interesting questions. I hope you get published with this one, it's nice when a poem is about something profound.


  • PurpleSky
    April 24

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    I often think of death and what is to come after. Nothing like the great unknown to make ones mind ponder. I love your last stanza it is beautiful and is how I also feel. thank you for the thought provoking read.
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    Lena