Your blue eyes smiled at me today,
And I knew exactly why,
For the end of the road was not far away,
Our time to say goodbye.
I've been contenplating this sorrowful day,
For hours and hours on end,
I find that it's just to hard,
To live life as your friend.
Your smile always lit up my day,
Your eyes made me pull through,
Even when we were friends,
How much I thought of you!
So, this goodbye must be real,
For me to walk away.
You must know exactly how I feel,
From the words that I say.
So, this is it, our LAST goodbye,
Just hear this and I'll go.....
You gave me more to live for,
Than you'll ever know.
~i'll always love you patrick--
~love leah
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noting to say. heart feels light. finally over. dead and gone.
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"You gave me more to live for,
Than you'll ever know."
That's really powerful. It's amazing the impact we can have on people without even realizing it...Thanks for sharing. This was very sad and quite touching. I like it a lot. =] -
OMG, you pen with such depth and soul, with so much passion and fire, and you're only 17??? Good Grief! When I was that age, I was still writing with crayons!
Hey, no WV bashing, yall! lol
write on!
~steve~
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Hahah crayons....those were the days....
Thanks for such an amazing comment Steve!
Woo!
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So lovely, sounds like you have been through so much pain, I know how this feels. A very relational write! Nicely penned.
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thank yuo corey, and yes, i know you've been through pain! why haven't you been talking to me anymore? But thanks again for the nice comment and the *cough
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Aww....geez. I loved it. I really did. Beautiful. : )
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