razers under my finger tips,
cutting till my finger slips,
falling down my finger bits,
on the bridge i sit,
now i wait to die,
only now do i cry,
and say a hevey sigh,
and now i say goodbye,
now i relize the words i say dont meen a thing,
so i try to think,
the worlds changing every time i blink,
so i jumped and started to sink,
now its over,
over,
over,
over......
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wow
its amazing it kinda reminds me of my own poetry in a way. its so sad.
"razers under my finger tips,
cutting till my finger slips," this is my favourite part. i love it. it reminds me of myself
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This is really good
i liked it alot theres
alot of emoition in it.
Great write
Sincerly~Emogirlinpain
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i stinks to feel this way but i love the poem!
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thx
i know ... thx for the comment
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Loved line 11
loved the title as well
Great job!
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I love line 9 & 11. Keep writing this is good.
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