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barbed wire

you wraped my heart in barbed wire,
now its burning like fire,
all over my insides,
and every night i cryed,
its all because you lied,
you werent there to help me,
you werent there to put out the flames,
and now i bow my head is shame,
i cant go on,
i cant keep going,
now my heart is slowing,
i just cant keep going.

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  • RavenS
    May 26
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    life sucks

    this reminds me of him how I wish I can forget and move on but I cant not without him

  • i love it!!! you rock

  • i thinks its very good


  • FREAkZ.RULE
    April 28
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    Good repitition


  • Mademokid
    April 24
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    thx

    thx for ur time and ur comment =)

  • Wow, I like this one a lot. I think the last 2 lines are very powerful. Good work.

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