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behind the veil

Missing image

 

 

 

 

the sun filtered
through a cluster
of feathers

 

as if the full radiance
would spoil the
pronunciation
of crashing white

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wonder if
symbols of years
hide behind the veil



and if the sheer
was lifted
clouds would part

and fade

 

 

 

Author notes

I took the chance to write on a subject I haven't used in a while.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 25

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    ah I wonder these too... Who knows about these things we've never been told about? Who am I to question?


  • joyfuljossie
    April 25

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    oiiii!

    Very nice, the universe consists of a lot. THis is a wonderful write; it captured me...
    and made me remember.....made me see