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Today is the Day

Today is the day,
where I feel alone.
I am surrounded by nothing
but dark clouds.
You are far gone.
I made my vow,
you made yours.
You didn't stick to it-
you ran out the door.
My white dress has turned black,
now there is nothing to my heart.
Its been running like a race track.
I need someone to love,
I need someone to hug.
I never want to have to say,
"I've had enough".
Thats because I need a....
warm
tight
cozy
'don't ever let go'
kind of hug.
Today is the day,
where I absolutely cannot
survive with out your love!
Please give me peace and serenity,
HUG ME!





Author notes


Everyone needs a hug.
and Everyone needs to be loved.
Don't ever deprive someone of something they deserve!

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Comments

  • Warm tight cosy, never let go kind of hug....ooh I would also love one of those you have written a kickass piece here
    Hugs are always a good thing no matter the age
    Well done

  • such a heart breaking write, where is this (you) that went away...sending hugs my friend...

  • Wow good one like the imagery