The day we first met,
was a day that I will never forget!
The look in your eyes,
cried out to me saying 'come stay by my side'.
You came over to me and said hi,
I blushed, said hi, and gave a smile.
I said I had to go,
but really had no where to be.
Truth was, I was melting from looking at
him, he was a beautiful masterpiece.
I have never seen such a gorgeous human in
my life,
I just had to have him,
I had to be his wife.
The next day I saw him,
we saw each other
at the same place!
He came over and wanted to eat lunch
sometime.
I said sure, I just had to be in his embrace.
We exchanged numbers,
and soon started to date!
We became very close,
and relationship you cannot break.
Till this day,
when we are not together,
I feel a part of me is missing,
like a bird needs its feathers!
I love him,
and never want to let go.
I need him,
for him I would do anything for!
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This is a sweet, beautiful, and simplistic poem. Great job.
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beautiful
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Dear Trill: Such a tender, love-filled poem. Written from your heart, and it shows well! Love, Janjan xoxo
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thank you janjan!
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Wow, the simplicity of your language and of your plot does nothing to take away from the impact of your story. A wonderful write that gave birth to a very real and very relateable story. Thank you.
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thank you very much!
i try to make all my poems and songs relatable!
glad you enjoyed!
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