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Save Myself

Standing here
Is all
I can do
To keep from
Going back,
Back to that place.
I don't want to go.
I want to
Run away,
Save myself
From the pain
I know staying here
Will cause.

Author notes

Pic Prompt:
More Than This by =strany

Link:
http://strany.deviantart.com/art/More-Than-This-120029332

A contest entry

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    May 2

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    Thanks for your entry

    This is effective in showing the train of thought many people have when leaving. It's so hard to not go back.. but we have to try.

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    Shari


  • StarEyes
    April 23

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    I wonder how many will be able to relate beside me... You did great on this one!

    Best of luck in this contest!


  • Jazzlyn
    April 23
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    wow really good
    i liked it

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