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Crying Times

Over and over you sing
Over and over you sigh

You break my heart
You mend my soul

It makes no sense
It means everything

The passing time continues to roll on
The passing time seems to stop the pain

The eruption of pain within cannot stop the love that i feel
You take my heart- you put it through a grader

You break my heart
You break my heart

and the time has come to end
these crying times.

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  • StarEyes
    April 23

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    Well, this sounds like what my life used to be with my ex.... fits it perfectly. What a great job you did on this one!