She may never be
an expert in any field,
she may never be
completely aware or interact
with the world around her,
she may never speak a word…
Overwhelmed, she freaks out,
throwing herself to the floor,
amidst the stares
and rolling eyes of ignorance,
oblivious to their distain,
struggling to find understanding…
But every day, she strives,
trying so hard to overcome
her frustrations in life,
climbing mountains,
achieving things that others
just take for granted…
And what seems like
such a small step
and pales to insignificance
in the eyes of some,
is such a huge leap
for my wonderful little girl…
She is so full of love,
I adore her so much,
she makes me so very proud,
each and every day of my life…
Author notes
My daughter was diagnosed with autism at age 3, she is now 11, non-verbal & communicates via PECS & a Dynavox on loan from her school (Ashgrove School is the only school in all of Wales that caters exclusively to the educational needs of children with autism)
Pic: Me & Marnie...
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I've read this before and reading it again is no less moving.
What a wonderful father you are; and she sounds like a loving daughter. I don't blame you for being proud of her!
karen
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i read one book about a girl with autism, and your poetry reflects it well. a psychology mystery, indeed. thanks for sharing.
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wow, that left me breathless, such a heartfelt write, so much emotion held within, i can relate as my daughter was also autistic, though she could be very vocal at times, brilliant piece.
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Aww hun
Your words penned melted me
in so many ways and for many reasons too
She looks adorable and a smile in her eyes light up anyones day.
she is a star and so are you
Much love and thanks for sharing with my brother xxx
Julie
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By this read I feel you await any improvement can come one hint at a time, patience is a virtue here, as I feel your optimism has a great deal of pleasure felt by the love received back.
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Oh Dear Sweet Lord
your words bring tears to my eyes, she is so lovely, in a small way I understand your pain, my grandson suffers from the effects of fetal alcohol syndrome, he may speak, but he may never register real emotional response to another, it is so hard to watch those we love suffer, your love and hers pour out through the words and picture here. I am humbled at sharing this piece of your heart
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I am so moved by your devotion to this little angel and she is blessed to have you as well...Thank you for allowing us to see the beauty within both of you...Love and Light,
Helen -
Such passion in your words. My daddy is my best friend, my world, my life, my entire everything. I'm not amazing, I'm not perfect, but he stands by me in all that I do, and I can tell that you do that for your daughter. Such a touching and loving piece. So many times, autism and kids with it are looked down upon. My cousin has it, and he is one of my favorite people to hang out with, he just makes me laugh, he makes me have a good time. Your daughter is an absolute beauty.
xx always,
gypsy
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What a beautiful tribute to your special angel! I used to teach Autistic children years ago and found it to be so rewarding I still remember each one of my special angels and loved them all so much and always will. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt write. Hugs Theresa
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oh, wow - I didn't know...
this is absolutely amazing and I am so very grateful that you shared this with us here. The picture of the two of you is adorable. I am very moved! You are blessed to have each other...
Karen
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Dear brother...
She is beautiful!!! A precious child whose eyes shine with so much love! It is so easy to see the bond of father and daughter. Your poem expresses clearly and tenderly your adoration and pride for this very blessed child.
This is simple heart warming!
Love to you both!!!
Az
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Looking at the picture
seeing the love--in abundance
is moving beyond what I can express
then your words of adoration,
hope , and pride, just to name a few,
melted my heart.
She is so lovely
thank you so much
for sharing this little
angel with us.
~Pastel
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She has a beauty all her own , Thank God put her with you and you have the gift of her.
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splendid !!!
brought a tear to my eye...............as it would............nice write -
aw Big brother this is a wonderful poem about ur little girl. I love it!!!! you portrayed this piece so very well!!!! This is amazing. Your words are so tender and loving and she is so blessed to have a loving father like you as are u to have her as a daughter. God has blessed u both. This is too good for words. I love u soooooo much!!!!!!!
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Oh wow My dear brother
This is an amazing expression of your love for her.
Her daily struggles and the awkward stares are something i am use to also. who cares what others think, they are amazing and we love them.
But it is so worth it every time they reach even the smallest milestone. we hoot and holler and people think we are insane but we don't care cause we are a very proud parent.
This is an amazing piece of you and sweet marine.
Thank you for sharing a peice of your world with us.
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A personal glimpse of what makes you tick, and wonderfully written. Love it...
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She is a beautiful angel. You are blessed from the
highest powers. Marnie and you are in my thoughts. Thank you for the indroduction, she is a angel. You pen from the heart and the strength and love within you is felt moons away.
Thanks for this read
Aleshia
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This is a wonderful tribute to your angel, Marnie. She has the light of joy in her eyes and the knowledge that she is loved. She sounds wonderful. I wish people who pass judgement through sheer ignorance, would take the time to seek understanding of others that are different. They only have to look in someone's eyes to see the innocent beauty and sheer determination it takes to deal with Autism or any other 'unseen' disorder. Well done Bruv.
's to you both.
Mariana
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Fritz that is the most gorgeous photo of you and your best girl, I hope you don't mind that I have copied it for myself. She looks such a pretty girl and so happy there with her Dad. I really love this poem of the feelings you have for her. Fathers and daughters are such a very special combination and you allow nothing to get in the way of that bond. Marnie is lucky with the love and support she has from you and you are a lucky man to have her in your life. Sheila
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aww
well said. i love this poem!! good job! Good Luck -
Fritz my friend, what a privilege to be introduced to Marnie and yes, all that matters , her mountain-high achievements and your mountain-high love, acceptance and nurturing of who for who she is, she is a small person with a big challenge, methinks she has the bounty of having the best Father a girl could have, for a Father who see's his child as a blessing is a Father that every child should surely have but sadly doesn't. A heartwarming piece of personal poetry, a tribute and testimony that is already a trophy for it sits on the shelf within the mantlepiece of your heart.
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