Violet haze
blue phantasma
Rake across the eyelid
of a fat, damaged whore
While ghastly triclopean, carcinogenic
Cocks transpire
To rape the lashes
Somewhere below
Crooked laugh track
Burrows through my barricade
Up from serrated, rendered platform
An insect eating its own legs
Star glow struggles
A purple sigh
Reflected upon the misty brows
Of the tumor giants
The hefty slut quiets her moaning
Her clientele whisper loudly of sex
Somebody needs Someone tonight
She admires her tire tracks
While somewhere an orgy of feet
stomp her to sleep
The timber growth stands ebony
through the gloomy crayola mist
Stretch marks separate our side
Of her varnished tit
Long aluminum licks
Lovely shock
Electric thrum pierces through skin
Please lift out the flesh
Dislocate the hulking bits
And dry them out in your dark centrifuge
Mighty Space Pimp
This is my box. Down here.
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raw..and dark....wicked to enjoy!
You touched upon this prompt cleverly...
as a dark writer myself,
I might have touched that line
Her clientele whisper loudly of sex
Somebody needs Someone tonight
Her clientele whispers loudly of sex
demanding orgasmic cleansing
...the whores that I have known...
are typically pleasers and pretty damn pathetic...
enslaved to their addictions...and re-trievable.
brillant last line:
Mighty Space pimp
you could easily turn into this into a lyrical song
or even rap..
ears/Seattle
way to write on a very dark prompt!
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Why, there is nothing wrong with enslavement. As long as you're willing.
That's quite the contradiction, actually...
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Shocking, a slap in the face, like chugging too much Coke at once--it hurts, but I still do it.
I can't even do this piece justice.
Rereading now..
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Wow.
I don't think I've ever seen such an enthralling, yet almost random, series of powerful adjectives used in a poem. It stands very morbidly over a withering husk of much more lighthearted affairs, those quaint. No, this feels like an ethereal revenge, with an over sized harlot at it's center. An astonishing enough piece for me to give you applause, even when it'll cost me points.
That was truly amazing, I must admit your writing style is an anomaly from the tofu of AP. Again, astounding. If you have any other works like this, I would be very interested in reading them. No lie.
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I really wish I could applaud comments.
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