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You Sheltered Me

I'd fled this furious element,

faced it's aftermath in a mental storm.
You fed me, clothed me, housed me,

kept me and mine from more harm.
Fear often kept me tensely silent from week to week.
Then, one of you a kind word to me would speak.
When I wished to hide,

just run away from this life-altering tide,
one would make me smile, putting pep back in my stride.
You touched my heart in ways I find hard to explain.
Now each thought of you makes my eyes flood
as New Orleans did after Katrina's reign.
You sheltered me, this stranger in your midst.
Without hesitation, you did this.


You blanketed me with love,

warmed me with compassion,

thawed my uncertainty with fire from your souls.
You put your own lives on hold to shelter me.
You never called me a refugee

nor did you address me as evacuee.
I was dubbed a resident.
You'll never know how much that meant.
You opened up your sanctuary.
There you let my weary spirit tarry

to ease the burden my tired body did heavily carry.


Confusing stubbornness for strength,
I'd try to hold the moisture's fall from my eye.
Then, your Co-Pastor told me,
" Go ahead, it's okay to cry."
At the precise moment

I thought I'd reached the end of my rope
I raised my head to find myself filled with New Hope.
A force more powerful than nature,

the actual Creator of both you and I
sent me to your doors and I've stopped asking myself why.
I no longer need a reason.
I know to question God's will is tantamount to holy treason.
These words are His way of allowing me
to thank you all for sheltering me.

c
opyright # TXu1-260-432

Author notes

This poem is dedicated to Bishop Searcy,(his wife) Co-Pastor
and the congregation of New Hope Missionary Baptist Church.
418 Morgantown Road in Natchez, Ms
They opened the doors of their church,
their homes and their hearts to us and our pets.
I will be forever grateful to these people for the shelter they gave to me,
my family and my fellow New Orleanians.

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  • Jesann gold member
    November 29
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    Such a warm & heartfelt poem of gratitude.
    A very beautiful tribute to the people who opened their hearts & homes to you and your family.


  • Gods child40 silver member
    September 19
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    what a beautiful poem. I'm sorry about your pain, but God brings healing and restoration! I truly enjoyed reading!


  • Debra A Baugh gold member
    September 7

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    Totally from the heart & soul

    the is one of the most heartfelt well-written poems I have ever read since joining the site.....it has so much coherency that there isn't a line in it that doesn't make sense......kudos......Ms Gypsy via Orleans.......I loved this poem......I chose to read it twice.....that is how well-read-written this poem......you did a superb job.......you eloquently pulled this from your very core.......the pastors that took you'll end will deeply appreciate what you wrote in tribute to them for the kindness and care they bestowed upon you.......love peace & harmony


  • condor gold member
    August 29

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    Love, this is a wonderfully touching tribute to these outstanding people who were there at a time when you needed them. Hurricane Katrina had destroyed so much and laid much to waste, but out of the wreckage came the good of people like the ones you mentioned. I remember watching this all on the news here in Australia and could not even imagine the horror that you all must have gone through. We have cyclones which are horific but they tend to be way up north. This piece was very emotionally charged and I could feel in your every word, the very deep appreciation and thanks that you were sending out. Keep up the great work because you are a very gifted writer.


  • Ellis gold member
    August 18
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    A beautiful tribute to the good people of this church -- who care.


  • tresmemphis gold member
    July 14
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    So nice and heartfelt!! I understand the strife that you went through although not first hand. Believe me those that volunteered and help got a personal sense of satisfaction in it....as I did. I look forward to reading more of your work. This was good read. Thank you


  • anakaro-1994
    July 12
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    i love it
    i love the flow.


  • katie marie silver member
    July 11
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    Wonderful tribute, written beautifully. Such a wonderful flow and rhythm to this.

  • Wow.

    This is a beautiful poem of the kindness of humans, when there is so much cruelty. May I say congradulations that you survived along with your family and may I say that this poem is one that I will probably read over and over


  • kam359
    July 6
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    very nice

  • You are a simply beautiful woman and it shows within your poetry. This poem is deep and filled with emotion and love from the beginning to the end I love all parts of it. Have a blessed day.

  • Isn't it awesome how places and people like this pop up just when you need it?

    I made so many friends that are family now when Katrina came through. I live in east texas, in a small town that has eleven hotels and seven safe houses so we saw all of you by bus fulls. you all changed my life.

    Thank you for the delightful read.


  • Vickie Rosa
    June 29

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    AMAZING GRACE

    Beautiful indeed is this piece giving our lord thanks. Sheer beauty in these words my friend.
    Blessed are you for doing that. Peae be with you.

  • Thank you for the entry

    Beautifully written. Its a wonderful poem. I love it.


  • ajocean silver member
    June 22
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    nice piece keep it up i like it.

  • !WOW!

    What a powerful feeling... I can feel how personal this was to you and how greatful you really are. A wise man once told me that poetry means nothing if it feels nothing, but all your work has that. Amazing!


  • Quazeemodo6 silver member
    June 17

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    BEAUTIFUL

    More people need to trust in the Lord, Amen to your situation, God is good and he's good all the time. your work is very inspiring.


  • ml12
    June 11

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    Hood-Wink!

    I thought that this read beautifully and told a great story. It's so good to hear that some good has come out of it and I wish you all the best in your journeys. Cheers

  • celadia
    June 11

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    this is a heartfelt piece, it just shows that when things go wrong, there's always someone standing by wishing to help.


  • azure85 gold member
    June 11

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    HOODWINKED!

    Oh, what a poem of hope and courage. Blessing to the Bishop and his church who showed good works during the time of need. You took us all with you throughout your poem.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    June 11
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    Hoodwinked!

    Well, my first visit to your work, and I say, thank you for the pleasure and honor of this read...Magnificently penned from the heart, in flow and rhyme! To share your experience of such a traumatic time for you and your family at Katrinas fury, and this dedication to the Bishop Searcy..is a breath of fresh air to read...Bookmarking! Do keep your quill in the ink well!

  • Nicely penned...

    It is amazing how much emotion floods this piece of poetry. That is awesome that you found some kind people in the midst of such a hard time. Great work here with this poem.


  • LittleMoon silver member
    June 9

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    A privilege to read someone who writes from their heart and soul, tells it as it is and everyone else can either like it or lump it. Brilliant and well done. Your honesty shows in each line, no pretence and no bull. Sheila

  • hjerstedt
    June 7

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    refreshing

    I LOVE THE SPIRItuality in your poem. Even still you are a sexy woman.
    what I mean by that is that the sensitivity you display is a turn on. and what else is poetry for

  • Very Good

    This was a nicely written THANK YOU Poem.
    I am sorry I haven't been back in contact with you lately , Have been doing a lot. Will try to get on more. Your Friend "BOO".

  • Heart Warming

    Wow, what a joy it is to be able to read a poem by someone who has survived so much and found such grace and compassion in the midst of it. I had heard about families sheltering the victims of Katrina but never have spoken to anyone who did so, or survived it. I'm so glad to hear you found kindred souls to help you through that nightmare.

    Great poem. My favorite line was, "You blanketed me with love, warmed me with compassion, thawed my uncertainty with fire from your souls."

    Take care,

    Mark


  • lyricist
    June 3

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    beautiful

    its good and wonderful for ones to open heartedly welcome one in when times are extreme and really take care of them. i believe its humble and shows one true character and thats love


  • Raspy
    June 2
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    Soul searing

    This pierced and touched me deep within my soul. I find a brilliant writer in here almost everyday.
    This is truly so beautiful and really much enjoyed by me.
    I read your profile.
    Wow, a woman of substance.
    Thats one of my hobbies too,picking wild flowers,i simply adore them and prefer them to expensive long stemmed roses...
    Tc
    Arlena...


  • DeeDee
    May 21

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    Magnificent!

    Girl you have another winner! Doreatha, I adore everything you write, the passion, pain, heart & soul that goes into each one of your poems & stories, has always shone brightly. You are a gifted writer, one who makes the reader feel every word and every emotion. What a wonderful expression of love & deep appreciation you put into this poem. You know that I am not a religious woman, although I do have a very spiritual side & would someday be honored to sit at the New Hope Missionary Baptist Church & give thanks for the wonderful gift of love & friendship you & your family received at such a hard time in your lives. OK, back to your poem. It was real, honest, filled with emotion &, vivid imagery. The love you have for those this was written about is awesome. Another great write! Thank you!!...DeeDee

  • ok, I'm crying. I knew I would if I read you, your soul just pours out, it's beautiful! Thank God for the people of New Hope! It's His love that brings us together, allows us to give, unconditionally, and allows us to put aside fear and pride to recieve when we need and appreciate those who give. You are full of the spirit. I met a woman, an artist, the other day, a poor, black woman who has had her share of stuggles, she draws images from her dreams, from the spirit, she'll be famous one day, but she said, she prays not to become rich, she is already rich, when you have Jesus, you are rich. I said to her, that is so true, but why not pray to never be greedy? If you are rich in money, you can be generous and I know you would be, she said she would and she would change her prayer. I'll never forget her. Now I'm rambling. lol
    Your poem is inspiring, thanks for sharing yourself.
    blessings,
    Michelle

  • You are a very passionate poet on so many levels, and this is a wonderful dedication
    and heart-felt expression of gratefulness.

  • friend
    May 17
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    you made me feel you. ty for sharing this. God bless.

  • the write is totally chilling, god bless you and all the victums of natures fury we recently had a whole stsate victoria burning , thousands of homes destroyed hundreds died it stopped the nation and like your fellow church group austraians and the world rose to assist crisis like these do bring the best out in people thank you for a brave enlightening piece.

  • wow what a poem, I am completely privelaged to have read it, not only is it moving to the core, but with such incredible strength and talent, bravo
    thankyou
    theresa

  • S-j
    May 12

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    wow thanks for sharing...sent goose bumps down my spine, there our some true angels about that are here to save us from harm, and i believe as long as we ourselves, would do the same then this old world can only get better...a great write

  • Lovely and touching.

    This is touching to think about.It kind of restores ones faith in humanity.

  • I sincerely hope that you shared these words with the Pastor and his wife. Far too often, we allow our gratitude to sit within and smile knowing that we feel grateful but what is gratefulness if not shared with those we are most grateful for having in our lives. I am sure the generosity of these fine people will always shelter you from the storms life tends to blow our way. Your words share with the reader your compassion and the spirit of open hearts, minds and arms. The flow and rhyme, along with the heartfelt feelings are truly beauteous. There are blessings in all things. I am grateful to the Lord above that you are a Katrina survivor.


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee



  • Ez Writer silver member
    May 6

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    Hi Gypsy !!

    An awe inspiring poem & dedication !!
    Solid penning , rhyme & flow - excellent !
    It's late right now but i'll be back - Reading more
    of your poems THANK YOU !!
    Best wishes & hugs ! Friend Easy

  • Bob Fox
    May 1

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    Gypsy

    This is a wonderful read. There good compassinate peoplele in our world. Your faith & there's goes unquestioned. Happy days and happy writing.

  • This is a beautiful piece. I read your author page as well and I am sorry for all that you went through and no doubt continue to go through since Hurricane Katrina (which ironically carries my name, shitty luck I know ). Your strength is what will carry you forward and the ability to be helped by others - is something many people lack. This is a fantastic heartfelt tribute to those who helped you in your time of need.
    Having fought my share of difficulties in life, I wish you nothing but the best in your continued journey. Keep writing!!

    - Katrina


  • pranj
    April 25

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    Amazing way of showing your gratitude! The words flow very well! Its a great write, and really simple yet elegant! Great write!


  • bigperm
    April 24

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    The truth is in your words...

    This is a beautiful piece and I'm glad to have heard your dedication. I read it like it was being read to me, very smooth rhyme and meter, which really guides the reader at a comfortable pace. There is definantly something to be said about a nation truly coming together after tradgedy. People are genuine and sincere when they want to be. It's too bad we have to have had such tramatic events to prove we are all still human.


  • LiMarie silver member
    April 24
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    What a lovely graceful thank you, beautifully said

  • Tecohe
    April 24
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    No text needed

    No sacred text is needed when you live out your faith
    Not of stopping others from their choices but in making yours count
    The deeds spoke, they embraced, they empathized and will never stop bearing witness
    To real love and kindness.
    It even brought forth progeny in your poem.
    Tecohe

  • My goodness,you made me wanna shed a tear there.
    This was so heartflet .
    And you put your heart and soul into this piece.
    And i am sure that the church was honored to have someone like you in their lives and was more than greatful to help you when times were rough. And this poem (i hope you show them) will truely show them how much you are thankful .
    God bless you hun!
    -Mandi


  • Lowell Poe
    April 23

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    Good lord lass,
    ya got me.......
    a little welling up there ya gave me little gypsy...
    this is so beautifully human...
    im bookmarking this to show others.....
    being a political person i cant help but think that this country and this last administration could have done a hell of a lot more to help our own people....
    but that really pulls away from the beauty of this piece....it could be any situation where our brothers and sisters need help.
    This touched me deeply lass.....
    your talent brought beauty to mayhem....it is what a true poet does.

    God Bless ya
    little gypsy,
    Liam.

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