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Love ?? hah
It’s just a four letter word
Indefinable bullshit I label absurd
An intoxicating effect from chemicals released
A sultry temptress
Can disguise a ferocious beast
Like a dog you wear a chain
I call it a collar
Displaying her name
If love was something you could actually define
It should be benevolent
Not fuck with your mind
If her feelings were true
She would want to see you be free
And satisfied with the fact
Your laying here next to me

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