We had picked out names and made plans
but bought only one tiny sleeper.
It was periwinkle blue and read "Bon Nuit mon petit etoile!"
Good night my little star.
Thursday is the saddest day
wrapped in tiny white flowers and awkward apologies
hospital gowns and long drives home.
Now I breath deep and try to remember how to stop crying.
Please tell me what you think
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Thursday is the saddest day
wrapped in tiny white flowers and awkward apologies
hospital gowns and long drives home.
beautiful
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Oh... I am sooooo sorry for your loss. My heart and prayers go out to you!
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been there and will forever remember the hurt and pain that came from such a tragic event. keep talking when you feel the need...write about as often as you can...healing can come in some unexpected ways...remain open and you will receive your fair share of it too... my heart goes out to you..peace to you always in all ways...
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A touching write you have penned here. Sad, but holds beauty as well. Short, but leaves such an impact. I hope you find healing. Thanks for sharing.
MxA
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moving
captures the sadness of loss beautfully
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Wow this is pretty differnt but I really liked this poem, wonderfully written and itt was a pleasure to rfead.
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
oh dear
so very sad....
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