His grace
leaves me breathless;
awash with mighty hope.
I catch the winds of renewal
to home.
(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson
April 22, 2009
Author notes
6. SPIRITUAL in CINQUAIN form
A contest entry
- Forms with a Creative Twist by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended May 9, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on the trophy! It is well deserved. Nice write, the simplicity of it all makes it all that more amazing of a piece.
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joyfuljossie
Thank you so much !!
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This is so awesome. So much meaning in so few words. Very elegant. God bless.
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Thank you Darlee.
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Wow, so much said in so few words. Very powerful and inspiring. Very well done.
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simply flowing with graceful softness that fill the reader's mind politely.
-Keep the ink flowing!
-Ninth Poet
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this is so beautiful
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Thank you so much !! Blessings..d
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you are most welcomed
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sometimes the short ones tell more of a story to remember. 3 cheers 4 ya!
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shoutaloud
Amen !! And thankya.. Blessings. d
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your a winner, for such a beautiful write
blessings
Rend
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This is a beautiful cinquain. Thanks so much for entering my contest and for honoring me with a show of your work
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Thank you dear one for the honorable mention. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Hugs and blessings.Debby
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Beautiful write huni x x
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DD
Thank you !
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short and sweet...with a mighty message that needs few words to gety its point across. I enjoyed this simple piece of writing. thanks for sharing...peace
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KEPalmer
Thank you for your thoughtful comments. Blessings. d
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Winds of Renewal
Ah, Sis, this is gorgeous; so much said in so few well-chosen words! As with all things good, it starts at home, as they say, and it should be so! This is a GOLD winner as far as I'm concerned.
Much luv & hugs, SisBon
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:) Bon
Thank you my sweet sister.. Big huggaroonies and mucho muy awesome just for you.. love.. You are so precious to me !!!! d
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