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My Eyes

My eyes
are dark, are twinkling, strange...
my eyes are dark and green

green like forests dense
with secrets
whispered through the air

My eyes
are large, are round, are open...
rather seldom seen

innocent, and puerile, strange
as secrets
they will never share

Please do not look at me
Please do not look at me

I have a way
around the see through
innocence
that is my eye

Look to me,
I look away
into the depth
of endless sky

I have a way
around the see through
innocence
that filters shame

Call to me,
I turn to forests dense
whose winds
whisper my name

Please do not look at me
Please do not look at me

I fear for all which you may see

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About my difficulty making eye contact with people.

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 22

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    Wow, I love how you made this feel so intense.
    I'm sad to say I would probably un-nerve you completely, as I am one who loves to lose myself in anothers eyes. I like the feeling of the connection.

    • foggy lullaby
      April 23

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      Oh, thank you so much. =) I don't think so, though... You seem like the kind of person who would make people feel comfortable around them easily hee.


      • Pure Thought silver member
        April 23
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        I do try Mary, but I do so love to swim in peoples souls by diving into their eyes. The thing is, is to be comfortable with yourself.
        Buddy