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lady of mystery

Missing image
can u see it,
the beauty within
tho her eyes
no longer shine

she's become
dull and lifeless
lips still
vibrant and alive

from times past
your presence was known
but no longer a name
no longer a soul

lady of mystery
where have you gone
why must you linger
in this painting on my wall

~lady raven~

Author notes

painting by Jonathan Bowser
Written March 7th, 2004

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  • vampira1665 silver member
    August 27, 2006
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    Oh yes my dear. It is so. More than you know. When you see it, you will know it. Hope you can have it returned tho. Because if not, the pain is like nothing you have ever felt before.

    Hugs and bites, Vampy


  • sustaind
    August 27, 2006
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    perfect!damn you have an imagination
    is it possible to love at first thought?


  • Drama Queen
    July 9, 2004
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    Awesome. Iloved it. you also know that I love the pic.

    love, BRIDGET


  • Naughtygrlred
    March 9, 2004
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    lady of mystery is smoking


  • Night-lord
    March 8, 2004
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    well-done

    love the pic I like art like this and greqat discrition as well as always wonderful work well-done ..she does have mystery

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