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Burning the Midnight Oil

I'm waiting for your text
I'm waiting for your answer
I wait for you to call....

I want to hear your voice
when you are sick and angry
I want to hear your voice
when you say that you love me.

Cuz I am tired of being lonely
in the corner of my mind
I am sick of being laughed at
and told that i'm not worthy
of everything that I try so hard to earn.
Your the fuel
that my heart wants to burn.

I want you to say the things
that you have never said
I want to hear you laugh
when I chase you up the stairs to bed.
butterflies are in your eyes
they flutter in my head.
I fly on glowing wings
that beat a crimson red.

Cuz I am tired of being lonely
in the corner of my mind
I am sick of being laughed at
and told that i'm not worthy
of everything that I try so hard to earn.
Your the fuel
that my heart needs to burn.


I think you'll even find
that I don't really mind if you don't feel the same
From the very start I offered you my heart
in fascades of shards, so you won't be to blame
love's thesies are pieces in Qupid's evil game.
I would rather have your name
tattooed upon my brain
so I will not forget
how it felt to feel again.


Cuz I am tired of being lonely
in the corner of my mind
I am sick of being laughed at
and told that i'm not worthy
of everything that I try so hard to earn.
Your the fuel
that my heart needs to burn.


      {I would rather have your name
      tattooed upon my brain
        so I will not forget
          how it felt to feel again.}

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  • from the moment i started til the last word, i had that "awwh!" face. i like the lines...
    "I want to hear you laugh
    when I chase you up the stairs to bed.
    butterflies are in your eyes
    they flutter in my head.
    I fly on glowing wings
    that beat a crimson red."
    absouletly beautiful.

  • awww she's one lucky girl! . You write from a torn heart hun. wonderfully emotional yet bitter at the same time, but that is just me . bravo!

    Angel

  • awwww

    this is really good, and cute. i like this, a lot.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 24
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    awww, wow, this is amazing!

  • wow this is amazing its short but powerful

  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 23

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    this is very rapid, but i love it. it flows so well. and is sweet and bubbley. and cute bg, hahaha. only it makes it a little hard to see the words.
    Stephanie ♥

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