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Another Empty Shell

Feeling empty,

        Blue,

  Dark


        Alone inside.



The pressure drives in,

Deeper and deeper inside your soul,

Until the shell of yourself


            lies in pieces on the ground

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  • Red Rocket
    April 23

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    It's hard not to look at the world & wonder how it can be so beautiful; and, then have second thoughts on the same another time. You acknowledged here that human beings have souls. I like to think that they are grown as we live. Thank you for sharing this, I guarantee it is everyone's responsibility to cheer each other up.

    Are we more than just ceramic & air? Sometimes. See ya around