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cooped

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ignited atramental
doting delirious
on ichor running down her leg
so peccantly pleasing

years of drinking sweat serum
lead her to this straitjacket
(incidentally she also killed her best friend)

piddle pish on her wish
to bathe in the blood of angels
or salivate on christmas mangers

now they've caged her

 

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  • Firequeen
    April 27
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    This great
    very wonderful imagery
    Enjoyed this
    Thank you for the entry
    fire


  • maralisa silver member
    April 23

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    oh my a very powerful vivid write for the promt so dark throughout good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    April 22
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    ewwwww ichor sounds so..... icky.
    terribly disgusting write, nicely done lol


    • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
      April 22
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      ichor is the poisonous to mortals, blood of the gods. In more modern usage it is used to describe vampire blood.


      • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
        April 22

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        lol i know what it is, it's also used to define discharge from sore, like a watery or slightly bloody discharge --- hence my ick factor lol

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