Trapped
trapped with no where to go
burning inside
cursing under my breath
Trapped
trapped like a crazy
dont know how to handle
trying to pass the time
killing inside
cursing outloud
decriminated still
Trapped
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration by Firequeen.
700 points, ended April 27, 22 entries
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Nice!
Emotion. The best way to get out is to find the door, the key, and walk away. Oh, don't forget to close the door, once you have left. It is only good manners.
Howard
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Very Nice
This is a very nice piece. I like the line "burning inside/ cursing under my breath". Very nicely done and thank you for entering! -
i enjoyed this
thank you so much for the wonderful entry
Keep the ink flowing
fire
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OH MY GODE WHEN DID YOU GET SOOO GOOD!!!!!!!! UR SCARING ME!!!!!! THAT ONE U WROTE FOR MY CONTEST... OH MY GOD I HAD NO IDEA THAT WAS YOU!!!!! WHEN DID YOU GET SOOO GOOD?????
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oh well i will accept the praise
please please dont stop on my account
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when did i get so good? if you read my page u will see that i dont edit wich means i have always been this goodish
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my poem............................................. ok yah byebye
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