A rose not given
A kiss not received
An eight letter phrase
That’s rarely said.
A fake smile
A broken heart
A few emotions
Left untold.
A sad, boring life
A need for more
A lack of communications
Closes all doors.
The simplicity of a ‘cure’
So easily available
But the only person to give it
Is so blind to the fact.
Emotions have shattered
A heart has hardened
Love is locked up
And the key is tossed away.
A few tears of pain
And then it happens
“I love you
And I hate it when you cry”
Finally after what seems forever
Communication is the key
Emotions unleashed
And now a new page in the book of love.
Author notes
Okay I havent written in a long time and Im just getting into it. I would appreciate any advice given And this is a little personal but I really dont know where it came from yeah..
Help- I havent written a poem in years.
Comments
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Wow!
Have heard this in just plain words as well. Life is hard sometimes isn't it? And we wonder what it is that makes a difference or makes things change. Nice job of putting your heart on paper, Malzy. Love you bunches!!
Poppy
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The loneliest of times can be spent with the person that we love. I like how you've built this up until the ending. But then again, I'm a sucker for happy ones
Very nice 
Love,
Stacy
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Awesome poem Mal!!! I haven't written in FOREVER!!!! I need try to write one... LOL...
Hugs,
Beth -
This is good, intense emotional content here. Sadness throughout. I am so glad to see you writing. Please keep doing it! I liked how you flipped the cliche of "those three little words" to "an eight letter phrase".
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