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Why Imagine

I wake at night when no one can see
Even though I'm beautiful I have no glee.
And as I walk on these rose bushes so pretty
I notice that beauty has no degree.
For this world is oh so lovely!
People imagine and pretend of me.
But there's enough beauty in the trees.
So why not be thankfull and why dissagree

Why do we imagine of my beauty? 

When there's enough in this worl for we.

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i'm 11 years old

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    May 7, 2009
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    change your background , it is hard to read poem
    and enter in second round of fun and interesting creatures, I will keep in mind you are one of the first three poems to enter


  • Antipodi
    April 22, 2009

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    Tis true dear one but that is the beauty of this world so much we don't know about fabulous animals that do exist in some still untamed jungles ,have you seen a platypus (its an animal with a ducks bill , webbed feet and the body of a weasle with a tail of a beaver) weird happenings in the skies, miracles that have happened to real people, all reflected in the beautiful shapes and sometimes surprises of a golden sunset...a wonderful soul searching poem my young friend ..but remember magic is everywhere...the thing that sparkles in happiness and lives in laughter and play tricks with your eyes ...REAL MAGIC


  • Violinstrings silver member
    April 22, 2009

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    world not worl this must be about figment and petes dragon or a unicorn
    since you are talking of imagination it must be figment if you are imaginining a unicorn is still alive
    good job