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Death Awaits Me

drowning in the sin of my past
never able to move on
arms tide behind my back
unable to fight back
close my eyes
as my demons surround me
chaining me
to the destiny that awaits me
the past that haunts me
dragging me even further down
drowning in the pool of darkness
looking to the sky
waiting, hoping, dieing
until the end
death awaits
i curse you
who choose this path for me

Author notes

not a personal poem, just for the contest!

A contest entry

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  • Firequeen
    April 27
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    very well done
    i like the imagery
    Thank you for the entry
    keep the ink flowing
    fire