All I see is you and me in a room,
full of blooms.
As we breath in a rose scent,
in the air.
We except each other,
for who we are.
We learn from one another,
as we go on in life.
We intertwine,
I feel your lips on mine.
Our love is so strong,
your my strength
and peace of mind.
I feel your love,
in every way,
every day.
Author notes
Darlene Long
Totally in love
In a list
A contest entry
- Almost 200 Prompts! by KelsiEvermore.
2100 points, ended May 2, 47 entries
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beautiful emotions
You express your love for each other so well in this poem. You bring up many important things, as far as respecting each other and learning from each other.
Good luck in this contest!
Jeannette
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a very smart poem that is admirable and well written! a pleasure to read and i imagine you felt good writing this because it shows in the feeling of this poem.
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such beauty and love flowing from your golden pen dear sister...it is so easy to see your sweet heart is simply filled with love for your mate
niaish so much for sharing with me
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Liked this poem. Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest!
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Yes true beauty and imagery in this poem I really like it.
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What a beautiful and loving write, so sweet and tender and caring. Well written.
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