the words you say once
are words that are stuck with you
say no more I need not hear another word
you've got plenty on your side
never to be forgotten
just those few words will never leave you now
catch your breath and watch who is around
your word may be misinterbrited
even by those you love the most
captured and stuck forever more
just these words I say will trail behind
Please tell me what you think
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Wow i like it well done.
I have a couple of new poems on my page please come check them out... -
The hardest thing is to try and retrieve words spoken in haste or anger.You express that very well with this short piece A fine write and an enjoyable read
Excellent
You may like to check a small typo line 8
misinterbrited/misinterpreted
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I liked it.
This poem says a lot in very few words. Nice job. -
Hi !!
Lovely write & so true , words can
sometimes be misjudged taken in
the wrong context and to
never be forgotten ..
Best wishes !! Friend Easy
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