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You Complete Me

I like you enough to tell you how I feel
that even after three years of not knowing you
I can't believe it's real.
I've had a crush on you for so long
and even though it's early in our relationship
I feel so strong about my feelings for you.
I care about you and I even trust you
and this attention don't come cheap
I could always see us being more than just friends
as we fought and played on top of the sheets.
You hold a special place in my heart
and I can't see us being more than just minutes apart
because I have clearly fallen head over heels for you
I'm not trying to scare you or push you away,
but my love for you grows stronger each and every day.
You give me butterflies stronger than before
there is always a smile on my face when I see you walk through the door.
The only thing I want to do is be with you
to make you laugh and smile,
giggle and frown.
There is nothing more important in the world right now
than having you around.
You complete me more than you can ever know
and I love you more than I can show.
You see sweet heart my feelings for you are real
and I don't need to talk to another man on the side
to express to you how I feel.
I believe you are my angel sent down to me
to love me for who I truly am.

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  • individuality gold member
    April 26

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    a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly along the course of creativity, it lingers on the edge of brilliance, shining brightly with poetic bliss. and captures the colours of life, and love. in the folds of heaven eyes shine brightly, wondrously as the sparkled spiralled caress of magnificence sails through the twists and turns of splendid atmosphere. there is a flow that dances along with a smooth rhythm and stylish rhyme.

    but of course it could have been written better


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 22

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    This is s beautiful You are really in love. This is how me and my new husband is very muvh in love.