8 pm it’s raining
Tick tock goes the pendulum
Clock like, cock like
She is wanting and waiting
lush and indescribably fruit like
a soft phero-sexy cotton tease
that taunts a mouth upward
into a dark and grinning beast
she reads page 103
hotter, redder and so much better
makes her squirm a little harder
makes a lover of these white sheets
the rub on tumescent cravings is
a wett, flushed and heated yearning of
cum taste this she is liquid and ready for him
yet the spill is not yet, quite right
scene 4 the door opens
languidly she rolls over pliant and enticed
she smiles as he absorbs her and guiding
a hard nipple to his mouth she says…
I’ve been waiting…
Now take over
Author notes
A JinSays Contest.
Picture prompt: Image is called ‘Fresh’ by Mick Payton.
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A contest entry
- ~adults only II~ by JinSays.
601 points, ended April 26, 14 entries
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Comments
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ah the power of words, we as poets know this too well, we can read a good story and it can make us grab sheets and slide tongues over lips - to get one in the mood, a good ending again, with now it is my turn.
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cute i like it * smiles* yet its emerising some times but it means it was good writeing
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nice and hot, and ever thrilling to read. Good stuff here Hon, love,
jin -
This is VERY hot and erotic, but in a beautifully sensual way, a great read.
All the best ... Sue
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Interestingly erotic
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hahahahahaha!
You crack me up...could go places with that pineapple juice ...
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mmmmmmmm.
wow.
well written, and extremely hot!
this entire write is an excellent example of your unparalleled skill.
"makes a lover of these white sheets"
*raises eyebrow
*grins stupidly
*sips pineapple juice.
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