Keyholes staring down an abyss; secrecy in brass locks that swept past my fingertips...
Author notes
give me one poetically profound line/sentence
prompt is ~ I'm not allowed to touch....
A contest entry
- another in my one sentence series by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 23, 2009, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Leave me thoughts:
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How captivating. I can see Donna also loved this one and awarded it a beautiful shiny. Such a profound sentence. Congratulations


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interesting....beginnings of a masterpiece here
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so well penned....
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Oh. My. God.
This is genius!!!
I love it!




