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Don't worry about what you have to say to me
I never really ever take my self so seriously
I'm just bitching because I have more space to free
Don't call me a cunt unless you know what it means
Because your words are so harmless to someone like me
It's too hard to joke a joker when you're too fucking clean
I'm pretty comfortable with where I'm going with this
And if you don't like it don't read anymore of my shit
I don't know why you have to be such a dick
it's not my fault that your mom hit you when you were six
I'll say what I want it's apart of the Amendments
So don't come around and tell me I have to watch my mouth
Because then it makes me want to just shout it out
It's not my fault that you've just been dismissed
Just buy a bigger size if the shoe doesn't fit
It's really not even that hard to get
So keep up with what you got
I've got a whole lot of hype
And all you've got is your music and your crack pipe
Don't lose anymore teeth from the sight of me
Because I'm not worth a Route Canal and sinister dreams
Don't come and cry to me - it's just a waste of my time
Don't come and laugh with me - you're just not that funny
I'm not going to be all buddy buddy to someone who doesn't know me
So quit being all whiny and stop getting so pissed
It's just your fault that you made yourself so dismissed

Author notes

This isn't to anyone specific. So don't ask me about who this is to. Just for fun

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  • Quaz
    April 23

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    That does sound rather hateful, if I might say so myself. It that's what you're shooting for, massive thumbs up. Actually, in any case, good, fun read... as long as you don't feel like it's directed at you. That perspective is just going to, as you would so bluntly say, piss you off.

    Which is good! Powerful, emotionally charged. A couple of good qualities to have in a piece, even if you adamantly despise AP oh-so much. ^_^


  • glenn shannon silver member
    April 22
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    i like.. its fiesty and firing the shots point blank entertaining read