Hold my hand
If you see me and know I'm there
If there's any way that you care
If there's a chance that we could be
If there's a chance for you and me
Hold my hand
To steady you along your way
To let you know I'm there each day
To give you strength in the face of fear
To comfort you and dry your tears
Hold my hand
For when I feel I can't go on
For when I see the rise of dawn
For showing me the way to light
For guiding me to the path that's right
Hold my hand
When things go wrong and I need a friend
When the story's about to end
When cruel Time threatens to change it all
When we prepare to take the fall
Hold my hand
Author notes
A poem written for a challenge on another site. Just decided to post it here cuz I haven't been on in a while.
What do you think?
Comments
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This is amazing! The emotions put into this piece are so beautiful! the flow is perfect and enhances the beauty of this poem. Great work on this! really like this!
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I didn't think it was really good, but then my friend Jordan put piano chords to it and made it into a song, which I thought was cool.
That made me like it better.
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This is such a wonderful write you have here. I love it! hold my hand. This was a pleasure to read.
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Wow, thanks! I really appreciate you commenting. I'm glad you like it.
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