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i saw you standing there.

i dont have words to explain
that i find you beautiful
in a silent strong way
like a gray spring day
you are what nourishes me
and makes me come alive
under your careful gaze
i can feel your eyes
move across my skin
and settle on the curve of my collarbone
to find your single minded satisfaction
that brings me a slow warmth
and easy smile
this centrifugal force
that pulls us together
and keeps us in orbit
moving with your silent grace
around me
in anticipation of when you finally
take a step in my direction

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  • CaliOkie silver member
    June 14

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    The first connection, that electric spark that flies between two people and when they first touch, the world tilts sideways.

    Excellent.

    Garrison